Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Lust and Cheating


How's that for a title, huh? Okay - actually, this post is for the One Word Blog Carnival hosted by Bridget Chumbley, the topic is Lust, and I'm cheating because I'm posting a short story by Brian Russell instead of writing my own. (Aren't I clever?)

So there you go...

Through Cracked Glass by Brian C. Russell


The crack in my windshield grows a little bit each day. It’s like the roots of a young sapling, sprawling to find water. I didn’t think it’d get this bad. It started with a chip, which started from a pebble. I swear if it were quiet enough, I’d hear it creak as the glass pulled apart.

I hate coming out here, but it’s what I do. My world is filled with watching people go in and out of buildings. Stores, restaurants, houses. In and out.

Oh, there’s the happy couple now. I fling my sunglasses into the passenger seat and pull the camera to my eye. These’ll be good.

She looks happy wearing a red pair of shoes she didn’t have before walking into the store, and he looks excited. His sunglasses were on before he came outside, and his jeans have strategically placed holes. She’s got a headband to match the shoes, I imagine, and khaki capris.

In each picture, they’re a freeze frame of perfect happiness. In each picture, they’re a snapshot of how her marriage should be.

In and out of stores, there’s sure to be a restaurant stop soon. Maybe then I can get some grub. I’m lucky my job doesn’t normally require me to drive fast. This windshield’s going to shatter someday soon. It’s only a matter of time.

This lady, I’ll call her Helen for her privacy sake, she probably just got bored. Bored with her housekeeping life, bored with her husband’s workaholism, bored with everything. But this new guy, he buys her gifts, takes her on dates. To Chili’s? She must’ve been pretty bored.

The people I watch mimic their actions. Popping in and out of these relationships. In and out of love. It’s amazing how quickly people can become shallow, empty hulls of the fruit, I’m sure, they once were.

A knock startles me. It’s a knock on my passenger window. I push the button and roll the window down a few inches. “Can I help you?”

His eyes are watery. It’s the client. I didn’t recognize him. “Stop. Just stop.”

I unlock the door. “Get in.”

“I can’t take it anymore.” He slumps in the seat. “She doesn’t deserve this.”

“What do you mean? She’s cheating on you.”

He sniffles. “I know. I’ve gotten the pictures. But, I realize now that I wasn’t providing for her.”

This is an interesting turn. It’s never happened to me before. “What are you going to do? Confront her?”

“No.” He straightens up in his chair, breathes in deep through his nose. “I’m going to go home, and do some laundry.” He sighs. “I’m going to earn her back.”

I set my camera down and stare at the client. He’s looking right back at me. “So, why the change of heart?” What else am I supposed to say?

He smirks. “First Corinthians. I’d heard it a million times, but seeing my wife with another man… it… The message used to go in one ear and out the other. You know?”

“Yeah, I get that.” In and out, people do it all the time.

“You might want to check it out too. It’s amazing what small things can have such a big impact.” His nose twitches as he gets out of the car.

The sprawling crack in my windshield creaks, I can’t hear it, but I see the glass splinter a bit more. All this damage from a pebble. “Yeah, I get that too.”

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To read this story from the wife's perspective plus more short stories from Brian C. Russell (and I would strongly encourage you to do so, and while you're there tell him to write more), visit him at at his website and follow him on the twitter at @Brian_Russell.

17 comments:

Bridget Chumbley said...

So good... especially reading it from the different perspectives!

I really enjoyed them.

bman said...

Word. GREAT pic too! Exactly what I imagined! We make a good team.

Bradley J. Moore said...

Great story, and a great writer! Thanks Katdish, as usual, for pointing me to another great blogger to check out.

(At first I really thought that he really was a Christian PI, writing about his sordid undercover stories!)

Now, let's see what the wife's story is.

Glynn said...

A really cool pair of stories -- putting our faith where our mouth is.

sherri said...

I enjoyed reading the different perspectives. Very interesting....

Doug Spurling said...

Thanks Kat. You've got an eye for finding great stuff. Thanks private eye Brian Russell. Mostly thanks Lord for 1 Cor. 13. Lovely.

♥ Kathy said...

That was good reading

Joyce said...

I read the wife's perspective first...loved hearing both sides. Great illustration of this week's word!

Marni said...

In the words of my favorite commercial from my (much) younger days... "good stuff, Maynard!"

Maureen said...

Good stuff, indeed!

L.T. Elliot said...

I'm with Bridget. Very good, having read both sides of it.

bondChristian said...

Yes, I'm with Bridget (both from her carnival and agreeing with her comment). I love the other side. Thank you for posting and participating in the carnival.

-Marshall Jones Jr.

Ginny (MAD21) said...

This is awesome!

Candace Jean July 16 said...

Wow. Looking at life from both sides is the only way to gain perspective.

M.L. Gallagher said...

Ok. So that was almost sinful to read... both sides now!

Thanks so much for leading me to B Russell!

Great find!

Helen said...

I read both sides. It was a great story leaving much to think about.

Cheryl said...

Haha Great way to pass the buck of writing! I'm glad you did. This was a fascinating read and now I know TWO new bloggers. I would give nearly anything to erase my past of adultery, but I'm daily thankful that God has given me a way to use my painful past and perspective to serve Him.